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Nick Winney's avatar

i couldn't really get the full measure of this as it must be a slice through some existing and established world? but the writing flows very well as a battle scene even though i have no idea who is who and what is what 😆

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Von's avatar

Yes, it is part of a much longer work. I haven’t exactly designed it for the chunks I put out on Substack.

The story begins with the introduction, here:

https://vonwriting.substack.com/p/article-17-intro

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Joseph L. Wiess's avatar

someone's gonna get yelled at. Someone didn't think like a soldier.

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