“We would watch each other’s kesh-u. If it was an official business meeting then some of the lesser employees, female, of course, would be told off to watch them.”
“And the
Jellia hurried down the stairs, indecently excited. A party! And Mother was sort of the guest of honor! Angelia had bought a new skirt (with mothers money!) In the blue of Ephemera Lines, and a light, white blouse, very formal looking, and she was ready to party!
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At least a break line or something to show the change of scene. And close the quote!
Are you missing something here:
“We would watch each other’s kesh-u. If it was an official business meeting then some of the lesser employees, female, of course, would be told off to watch them.”
“And the
Jellia hurried down the stairs, indecently excited. A party! And Mother was sort of the guest of honor! Angelia had bought a new skirt (with mothers money!) In the blue of Ephemera Lines, and a light, white blouse, very formal looking, and she was ready to party!
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At least a break line or something to show the change of scene. And close the quote!
Maybe you should be my editor. I’ll put your name on as a byline.