“Oh, Illoia!” Aleshia squealed, bursting into her cabin, “Did you hear?
So, is sending her father a written letter, or even a video recording, and having her friend hand deliver it out of the question?
It's only out of the question for the plot :)
I really wanted the scene where she got yelled at in the place of her friend, and I got some character development. I cheated a bit to get there :)
I just loved writing the line, "I'm not very good at brave. I haven't practiced much."
That is a good line.
I am not quite into romances, and I may have jumped into this abruptly without knowing the backdrop but it sure sounds like a horrible environment for me to be in, in all honesty. It still sounds like an interesting premise though.
So, is sending her father a written letter, or even a video recording, and having her friend hand deliver it out of the question?
It's only out of the question for the plot :)
I really wanted the scene where she got yelled at in the place of her friend, and I got some character development. I cheated a bit to get there :)
I just loved writing the line, "I'm not very good at brave. I haven't practiced much."
That is a good line.
I am not quite into romances, and I may have jumped into this abruptly without knowing the backdrop but it sure sounds like a horrible environment for me to be in, in all honesty. It still sounds like an interesting premise though.