“Darling?” Fenestra asked Iloh.
Just an editing point. If someone talks for several paragraphs, you need to remember to put a quote mark at the beginning of each paragraph.
Alternatively, he could have put the speeches into one long paragraph and open quoted at the top and close quoted at the end.
I read his story from beginning to end and I should have caught that in the editing.
Just an editing point. If someone talks for several paragraphs, you need to remember to put a quote mark at the beginning of each paragraph.
Alternatively, he could have put the speeches into one long paragraph and open quoted at the top and close quoted at the end.
I read his story from beginning to end and I should have caught that in the editing.