Discussion about this post

User's avatar
Jasini KC's avatar

Clever boy. Give her a task that she can work towards, one that is in her skill set, and a target that would get her close to the standard she is accustomed to. And one she can probably sell her father on.

Even without him giving money, the Governor must Know People. And probably even knows people who Know People. And have the influence to help him reach the upper levels.

Even so, the Hero comes across as a bit glib, and too pat with his answers.

I know that everyone in the story speaks in a rather stylized way, but something seems off about him.

Is his humming a plot point or merely a personal trait?

I'm caught up again. 🙂

Expand full comment
Tracy's avatar

Interesting characters, and very nice flow- I find myself disappointed this post ended so quickly. Looking forward to more.

Expand full comment
12 more comments...

No posts