Okay, I realize I am giving myself away here... But if someone does read the story they'll understand, it's obviously not meant as a standalone piece. It's a fragment--a glimpse into a moment. You don't get enough to make much sense of what the story here is supposed to be. (I know that's possible, many people achieve much more with fewer words.) I'll admit I'm useless at shorts. But, there are a few compliments, good ones, and a lot of helpful pointers. I've never thought of a story this way. I've never thought in these terms before, apparently quite obviously. Now that I know what you mean, I'm more excited than ever, and more than grateful. I know what to look out for. And I have a new understanding of what critique means. This is VERY helpful for someone, like me who has no idea what they're doing. Thanks new buddy.
Cryptic, but I see what you did there. Touché.
Okay, I realize I am giving myself away here... But if someone does read the story they'll understand, it's obviously not meant as a standalone piece. It's a fragment--a glimpse into a moment. You don't get enough to make much sense of what the story here is supposed to be. (I know that's possible, many people achieve much more with fewer words.) I'll admit I'm useless at shorts. But, there are a few compliments, good ones, and a lot of helpful pointers. I've never thought of a story this way. I've never thought in these terms before, apparently quite obviously. Now that I know what you mean, I'm more excited than ever, and more than grateful. I know what to look out for. And I have a new understanding of what critique means. This is VERY helpful for someone, like me who has no idea what they're doing. Thanks new buddy.
Do you want me to go ahead and include the link in my post? Posts can be edited, you know :)
Yes, I know. You may. Please do.