Anyone can write about sin. If by ‘writing about sin’ one means writing passages in which the characters do sinful things. And even where the characters, and those around them, are affected negatively by that sin. They can even write scenes where the character (as well as the others surrounding them) realise that it is their sin that is causing the negative effects, and react to those effects by turning away from their sinful activities.
Indeed much can be written, and is written, by the secular author about sin. But only the Christian author can finish the story. Indeed from beginning to end much is missing in the secular author’s portrayal of sin.
Christian Fiction
This post is part of a series of posts on the idea of Christian Fiction: books written by Christians that have the goal of glorifying God. These posts include:
Christian Fiction: What is ‘Christian Fiction’? Should our stories be just like those that the world makes, only perhaps a bit cleaner?
Redemption in Christian Fiction: The goal of redemption should be a fundamental principle in our fiction.
Preachy Christian Fiction: Fiction written by Christians should be ‘preachy’.
Christian Fiction and Sex: How should the Christian author deal with the issue of ‘sex’ in their fiction?
Profanity: How should the Christian writer deal with the issue of profanity and its godparent ‘realism’?
Creation and the Nature of Sin
The story of sin begins at creation. We can only understand the nature of sin if we understand the nature of creation. That God created all things ex nihilo. That before God spoke, none of the created order existed. After He spoke, it came into being. That it exists in reflection of His will.
And that sin consists of rebelling against that created order. Sometimes by denying that it is created, or changing the name of the creator. And always by turning things away from their created purpose. Contradicting their purpose (as with ‘gay marriage’), ignoring their purpose (as with bottle feeding), placing man’s wisdom in place of that purpose (as with birth control)… all sin is a perversion of God’s purpose.
The Naming of Sin
And the LORD said, Because the cry of Sodom and Gomorrah is great, and because their sin is very grievous;
Genesis 18:20
One of the most critical factors in the secular portrayal of sin is… naming it as sin. There are several replacements for the word, all of which also replace the concept.
It used to be that men spoke of the ‘seven deadly sins’. Now one can have an interesting discussion as to whether those particular sins were the most deadly, whether there were only seven, and the like… but they did clearly name sins and attempt to define them (sometimes with rather grotesque art). Nowadays the naming of sin seems to be in short supply. (Except, perhaps, for one or two sins that our modern society still admit exists, or have made up out of whole cloth.)
Mistake
Fools make a mock at sin: but among the righteous there is favour.
Proverbs 14:9
One of the most common ways of replacing the name, and concept, of sin when discussing it is to speak of a ‘mistake’.
It Just Happens
An high look, and a proud heart, and the plowing of the wicked, is sin.
Proverbs 21:4
Sometimes, especially when two sinners are involved, the phrase used is ‘it just happens’. Divorce is a common example. When the child, devastated by his parent’s divorce, asks why it is happening, the parent replies, “Sometimes these things just happen”. This is a lie, obviously. And a sin. It reflects the sinners refusal to claim responsibility for their sin.
Part of Life
For I acknowledge my transgressions: and my sin is ever before me.
Psalm 51:3
Another fallacy that is often trotted out when speaking of sin is to say it us ‘just a part of life’. Now, let us admit that sin is part of life… our current life. Our life lived in rebellion to God.
But it is not a ‘part of life’ that we should embrace, or ignore, or just walk silently by. It is a part of life that we should reject, and correct, and fight against.
Rebellion
For the sin of their mouth and the words of their lips let them even be taken in their pride: and for cursing and lying which they speak.
Psalm 59:12
But we Christians, in our fiction as well as our non-fiction, need to name sin as sin, and present sin as what it is… rebellion against God. It is not a ‘mistake’ it does not ‘just happen’ it is not a ‘part of life’… it is sin, it is rebellion against God.
Definition
Being filled with all unrighteousness, fornication, wickedness, covetousness, maliciousness; full of envy, murder, debate, deceit, malignity; whisperers,
Backbiters, haters of God, despiteful, proud, boasters, inventors of evil things, disobedient to parents,
Without understanding, covenantbreakers, without natural affection, implacable, unmerciful:
who knowing the judgment of God, that they which commit such things are worthy of death, not only do the same, but have pleasure in them that do them.
Romans 1:29-32
And as a Christian it is not just the nature of sin itself which we can bring forward, but the sin-ness of sins. We can point out that certain things are sins which the world, and even much of the church, treats as normal. I read a post today which started with ‘Given that I am a passionate Christian’ and then, in the middle, we read, “Have sex with him as soon as you are enthusiastic and comfortable with it.” It would be hard to give more unChristian advice… promoting sexual sin right after claiming to be a Christian.
The whole ‘realism’ crowd will tell us that we need to have sin in our books, and treat it as normal. To have our characters live like the world (and, apparently, ‘passionate Christians’). But our goal should be to bring forth sin… as sin. To make it clear that sin is sinful, that the penalty for sin is death, and to point to the only remedy… the gospel of Christ.
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The Bobtails meet the Preacher’s Kid
and
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Christian Fiction: Sin
Anyone can write about sin. If by ‘writing about sin’ one means writing passages in which the characters do sinful things. And even where the characters, and those around them, are affected negatively by that sin. They can even write scenes where the character (as well as the others surrounding them) realise that it is their sin that is causing the nega…
Christian Fiction: Redemption
There are things that the Christian author can do that the secular author cannot. They can pretend, they can assume, they can point… but the secular author can never arrive. The road they point down has no destination.
Preachy Fiction
The Spirit of the Lord is upon me, because he hath anointed me to preach the gospel to the poor; he hath sent me to heal the brokenhearted, to preach deliverance to the captives, and recovering of sight to the blind, to set at liberty them that are bruised,
Christian Fiction and... Sex
Behold, thou art fair, my love; behold, thou art fair; thou hast doves' eyes within thy locks: thy hair is as a flock of goats, that appear from mount Gilead.
When is it Profanity?
Study to shew thyself approved unto God, a workman that needeth not to be ashamed, rightly dividing the word of truth.
What Is Christian Fiction?
Ye are the salt of the earth: but if the salt have lost his savour, wherewith shall it be salted? it is thenceforth good for nothing, but to be cast out, and to be trodden under foot of men.
The whole topic has become so convoluted as to make it ludicrous. Either Jesus came to cover the cost of sin for the whole world as the book proclaims or He didn't . The confusion lies in the statements that appear to contradict that. John 3:16 for instance seems to contradict 1st John 2vs 2 “He is the atoning sacrifice for our sins, and not only for ours but also for the sins of the whole world” I mean what about those that never hear of Him in the country the are from? I'd say there are many in South America and Africa that have never heard of any of this. And when I read Psalms 103 it seems as if David would have been described as a deist if we were to take the common definition to heart.