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Sounds interesting, Von. I will give it a try.

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Feel very free to comment as you go along. It is very much a work in progress.

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It may take me a little while to catch up. I am in, but I have taken on a few too many subscriptions. And I still need time to write!.

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If you get a chance, you can tell me if the invisible post works. I'm working on a glossary for Contract Marriage, but I don't want it to be a visible post all by itself that gets sent to people and everything. So I played around with the settings and I THINK the only way to get to the glossary post is to click on a link in a Contract Marriage post.

Hoping it works cause I will want to use it for my other fiction etc.

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I have scanned two Contract Marriage posts and I see buttons for support, subscribe, comment, share, but I don't see any kind of link to a glossary. I may need more instruction. I will keep poking around and et you know.

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I have read through your intro and another four of your posts, and though your Contract Marriage story intrigued me at first, I a sorry to say I find we are polar opposites in our thinking. So sorry. but I will unsubscribe.

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No problem. I actually find it fun to be subscribed to some people I disagree with. You read through four of Contract Marriage? I didn't even think I had four up!

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I read both Contract Marriage posts, the intro and three other posts about guns, womens rights, marriage, etc.

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Did you change names? Or am I just remembering wrong, since most of the book seems to be from the daughter's perspective? I think this reads quite a bit stiffer than the later chapters do.

I do know that there is no way that I would have taken that job, no matter how much of a promotion it was.

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Apr 21Author

The story has mostly been written from the standpoint of the daughter, who is still in school. However, there will be a few chapters written from other viewpoints.

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Apr 21Author

I hadn’t looked at which chapter you were commenting on. This is the first chapter and is from the perspective of the mother. Most other chapters will be for the perspective of the daughter.

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