“Yes, Ska,” Jellia said, grinning.
“What did you say?” Teacher asked.
“I said “Yes, Ska.” That’s language from Libertas, the planet my mother and I are moving to,” she said, “I am assigned to practice all day, every day. I have a huge number of new words that I need to learn.”
“I knew you were assigned to learn it, of course. But what does that word mean?” Teacher asked. Then, seeing that the other scholars were all listening, she said, “Very well, gather round, and Jellia will present. Jellia?”
Jellia turned to the scholars and grinned. She was very nervous about going to this planet, but she was finding learning about their language particularly fascinating.
“I am going to the planet ‘Libertas’,” she said, enjoying the chance to lecture about something none of the other daughters in her class knew about. “On that planet, they have words that they use to refer to people. We scholars might use the term ‘cit’ or ‘teacher’. But they don’t use those. Well, they might say ‘teacher’, I guess, but I’m not mandated to practice that. And they never use ‘cit’.”
“What words do they use?” Lydia asked.
“Oh, lots. The one I am practising now has to do with whether someone is in their en-drek contract yet. If a woman is, or has been for a while really, then you call her ska… like I did for Teacher. If…”
“I am not in any such contract,” Teacher said. “Why, I hardly even know what it means.”
“Yes, ma’am,” Jellia said. “But if you were on Libertas, you would be, so I need to practice that. The program says that anyone your age should be assumed to be ‘ska’”
“All teachers are part of this contract?”
“Everyone is, as long as they are over a certain age… or development. You would definitely be, the program told me.”
“Very well. And if they aren’t yet part of such a contract?”
“A daughter who isn’t old enough yet, well, there are several names. I am a ‘kesh’… specifically a ‘kesh-i’, but they hardly ever say that, but when I get a little older, I will be an en-kesh and then en-e-kesh.”
“Sons go from being ‘kesh’ to being ‘li-kesh’, ‘lo-kesh’, then ‘ska’ like for daughters. Although if they get in a contract, they can go right from ‘li-kesh’ to ‘ska’. If they are en-drek to your ska-drek-a… your mother… you call them your ‘ska-drek’, and if they are en-drek to you you call them, well, ‘en-drek ’. There are a couple of other words, but they are only really used when talking about en-drek contracts.”
“That sounds hard!” Trisha said.
“And that’s only half of it!” Jellia said. “It isn’t like they wear name tags or anything, and if you call an ‘en-kesh’ ‘en-e-kesh’ they can get really mad, and you can even get in trouble… like calling a son ‘pretty’ or something. So you always have to pay a lot of attention during introductions and remember both the name and the level, and always remember to introduce yourself with your level.”
“I am Kesh Jellia Drendin,” she said, with a mock ‘greeting to the stranger’ bow.
“But why is it so important that you use the right word for everyone?” Lydia asked.
“Well, you see, the society is very… we would call it ‘sexist’.”
The daughters’ mouths all dropped open. Jellia had a moment’s thrill that she had managed to shock them. This was like something from a screeny. They would be talking about this for weeks!
“But… but why? Don’t they know that daughters are just as good as sons? Aren’t the daughters, like, really annoyed?”
The questions came in from all sides, and teacher stepped up. “Now, daughters, let Jellia explain. It is important to remember that the galaxy is wide, and people do things differently from planet to planet, and even in-planet.”
The daughters settled down and watched her. “What they do,” Jellia said, “ is they have… you might call it a long-term, live-in, heavy-date. A son comes to live in the house, full time, for a couple of years.”
“What?!”
“Daughters!” Teacher said again, and silence reigned.
“He is called an en-drek’, and… and he is in charge of making some of the house decisions, and the Mother… his en-drek-a, makes other ones. They each have their jobs, and they each dedicate eighty per cent of their income to the house-fund, which the en-drek a decides how to spend.”
“So what does the son decide?”
“He, umm, he decides what the house wears and makes decisions about food. But the really, really most important thing he does is called ‘code and custom’. His job is to issue commands which tell you how to get along in your society. To keep you pulling in consensus with everyone else. So, like, when I was talking to Netta I was telling her that everyone there, or most of the sons anyway, all wear guns. And I don’t want to. But he can tell me ‘code and custom’, and suddenly I’ll be packing a gun on my hip like in a screeny.”
The daughters all laughed.
“Scholars!” the teacher said, although she was grinning.
“And he is in charge. I mean, like, really in charge of the house. And in lots of other ways, the sons get to decide things, and they have jobs that are only for sons or only for daughters. More of them than we do. Not just, like, line safeties or something.”
There was a long silence, and then Teacher said, “Well, Scholars, it sounds like Jellia has her work cut out for her. I suppose over the next few days, we will all have to get used to having her call us…. Yes?” she asked Creia, who was frantically raising her hand.
“Can we practice the new words with her?”
Teacher was silent for a minute. “I suppose so. We want to support Jellia in her new endeavour. Very well. Anyone may use the new language once they have done an hour of priv-study on it. And, before you ask, Creia, I will give a free-study period now. You may either free study, or priv-study the language of Libertas. Jellia, you should study Libertas, obviously.”
Jellia nodded, and everyone bent over their comps. Well, except for Lydia, who went to the mats at the back and began stretching. She loved dance and physio and would always use her free study for one of those subjects.
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This post is both ‘hidden’ and in progress. I will be altering it as the book is written. Even the format may change from time to time. Feel free to suggest additions or changes. Glossary Abstinate: Someone not available for sex, possibly permanently. Not legal on Libertas and several other planets.
Contract Marriage Chapters, Newest to Oldest
Kesh-i Cooking Class
Children’s roles on Libertas. CookingThanks for reading Von’s Substack! Subscribe for free to receive new posts and support my work. Children on Libertas, who go by the name of ‘Kesh-u’ in the plural, especially female children (‘Kesh-u-i’) are expected to purchase food, food processing equipment, and to cook for their households, freeing up the older mem…
Language
“Yes, Ska,” Jellia said, grinning. “What did you say?” Teacher asked. “I said “Yes, Ska.” That’s language from Libertas, the planet my mother and I are moving to,” she said, “I am assigned to practice all day, every day. I have a huge number of new words that I need to learn.”
Shopping
Mother: Jellia, get on the 27 bus after school and meet me at Ardweens. Jellia: K Jellia ran down the steps from school and ran over to where the 27 line came in. Her comp had said it was due in five minutes, but you couldn’t really count on that. “Hey, Jellia,” Tristina said. “You don’t take this bus?”
Trader Galloway
Jellia got home, took off her cap, shook out her braid, and went upstairs. A minute or so later, she was in the fresher getting her initial quick rinse. Oh, what a day. They had done dance for two hours, and she had practised her new language until her brain bubbled.
Writing Class
Jellia licked the tip of her pencil. She liked being an archaic in writing class. She could write a lot faster on her comp, but she wasn’t convinced she could write better. Not poetry, anyway. And that was the subject for today: poetry. Specifically limeriks.
First Work
Fenestra stared at her office building as her bus pulled up to the stop, and kept looking at it as she got down. This wasn’t the last time she would see it, but it was close. That is, unless she decided to come back after her tour on Libertas. Come back as an acknowledged Trade Master.
First School
Contract marriage is an adult dystopia examining the issues of marriage. Like 1984 and Brave New World, Contract Marriage treats the relations between the sexes as a fundamental aspect of how a society is formed and, thus, how a society can go wrong.
Decision Reached
Contract marriage is an adult dystopia examining the issues of marriage. Like 1984 and Brave New World, Contract Marriage treats the relations between the sexes as a fundamental aspect of how a society is formed and, thus, how a society can go wrong.
Disappointment and Meditation
Contract marriage is an adult dystopia examining the issues of marriage. Like 1984 and Brave New World, Contract Marriage treats the relations between the sexes as a fundamental aspect of how a society is formed and, thus, how a society can go wrong.
Endrek Contract (second edition)
Contract marriage is an adult dystopia examining the issues of marriage. Like 1984 and Brave New World, Contract Marriage treats the relations between the sexes as a fundamental aspect of how a society is formed and, thus, how a society can go wrong.
Trade Master
Contract marriage is an adult dystopia examining the issues of marriage. Like 1984 and Brave New World, Contract Marriage treats the relations between the sexes as a fundamental aspect of how a society is formed, and thus how a society can go wrong.
I would like to give credit for the genesis of many of these ideas to the Liaden series by Mr. and Mrs. Steve Miller, which is available for free on the web. They do a great deal of cultural exploration, although they rather dramatically skip the moral exploration. (And their math doesn’t work.)
Other concepts were taken, in one form and another, from the book Freehold by Michael A Williamson
What is Marriage #1B
So, this is my first letter in this ‘letter exchange’ substack article series. I encourage you all to read what Andrew wrote in his first post, laying out the format and everything. He’s definitely a better formatter of Substacks than I am. In his letter he lays out a bunch of questions and thoughts about what marriage is, dealing with both historical is…
I like the way you've created a separate language for both planets.