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Jasini KC's avatar

I liked this section, especially that you make it obvious they are cutting in line (with everyone else's permission), but somehow Illoia is innocent enough to not realize it. 🙂

Once again, we see the holograms, and also AI.

I'm trying to decide. Having a description of the and undergarments is handy, but is it strictly necessary at this time to list all their functions? It seems to slow down the story somewhat. Obviously at least some of the functions need to be described before she needs them (she will need them, right), but maybe gloss over them a bit more here, and describe when she takes her sim?

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